Post by ' ' bubblegum. on Feb 2, 2009 22:08:12 GMT -5
Name: Rippedwhisker
Gender: Tom
Clan: Loner
Age: 72 moons (6 years, I believe)
Rank: Loner
Physical Description: Raggedwhisker is a shaggy grey tom with mysterious amber eyes that are glossed over with age. His left ear is torn, and he has a long scar on his face that runs fron his nose up to his left eye. His long matted fur is strewn with sticks, twigs, dirt, and anything else he picked up while he was wandering. Not only does he have a dirty pelt, but Raggedwhisker is huge. He is closer to the size of a badger than a cat, and has paws the size of dogs'. He has menacingly large teeth, and even larger and sharper claws which curve inwards, supplying a large advantage in battle. His body is covered in battle scars, and he has a permanant limp on his left leg.
Personality: Raggedwhisker is a deranged tom, who lumbers around clan territory. He is set on an invisible path, created in his mind. Despite his limp, and craziness, Raggedwisker is a perfectly capable tom. he can hunt, fight, walk, talk, and swim. Pretty much anything a normal cat can do, though sometimes he hears something that isn't there.
History: Raggedwhisker had the normal life a clan cat up until he became an apprentice. His mentor was ambitious, and crazed. He wanted to rule the forest. He taught Raggedwhisker all his deranged thoughts, and showed him how to fight dirtily, rather than how a real warrior should. But one day, there was a war. Raggedwhisker's mentor ripped many different cats' throats out. He sliced them up after they were dead, and left the mangled bodies on the grass where they died. The cats' clans never forgave him, and killed him at a gathering. StarClan was not angered...
Late on, when Raggedwhisker became a warrior, he started to follow through with hos plans to rule the forest. Then oen day.. he met his mate, and forgot all about it. He lived a happy RiverClan life, until one day, his mate died. His kit had just becomes an apprentice, and he knew he was getting to old to rule the forest. So, he taught his son, Sleetpaw his ideas. He taught him how to kill the dirty way, and do everything his way, but Sleetpaw would not learn... Raggedwhisker decided that it was the day to attack. He planned with his son who barely listened, then attacked the leader. The leader fought back.. and won. Raggedwhisker was run out of the clans, and now he wanders, seeking his son's vengance.
Codeword: SkyClan
Other: Nope
Gender: Tom
Clan: Loner
Age: 72 moons (6 years, I believe)
Rank: Loner
Physical Description: Raggedwhisker is a shaggy grey tom with mysterious amber eyes that are glossed over with age. His left ear is torn, and he has a long scar on his face that runs fron his nose up to his left eye. His long matted fur is strewn with sticks, twigs, dirt, and anything else he picked up while he was wandering. Not only does he have a dirty pelt, but Raggedwhisker is huge. He is closer to the size of a badger than a cat, and has paws the size of dogs'. He has menacingly large teeth, and even larger and sharper claws which curve inwards, supplying a large advantage in battle. His body is covered in battle scars, and he has a permanant limp on his left leg.
Personality: Raggedwhisker is a deranged tom, who lumbers around clan territory. He is set on an invisible path, created in his mind. Despite his limp, and craziness, Raggedwisker is a perfectly capable tom. he can hunt, fight, walk, talk, and swim. Pretty much anything a normal cat can do, though sometimes he hears something that isn't there.
History: Raggedwhisker had the normal life a clan cat up until he became an apprentice. His mentor was ambitious, and crazed. He wanted to rule the forest. He taught Raggedwhisker all his deranged thoughts, and showed him how to fight dirtily, rather than how a real warrior should. But one day, there was a war. Raggedwhisker's mentor ripped many different cats' throats out. He sliced them up after they were dead, and left the mangled bodies on the grass where they died. The cats' clans never forgave him, and killed him at a gathering. StarClan was not angered...
Late on, when Raggedwhisker became a warrior, he started to follow through with hos plans to rule the forest. Then oen day.. he met his mate, and forgot all about it. He lived a happy RiverClan life, until one day, his mate died. His kit had just becomes an apprentice, and he knew he was getting to old to rule the forest. So, he taught his son, Sleetpaw his ideas. He taught him how to kill the dirty way, and do everything his way, but Sleetpaw would not learn... Raggedwhisker decided that it was the day to attack. He planned with his son who barely listened, then attacked the leader. The leader fought back.. and won. Raggedwhisker was run out of the clans, and now he wanders, seeking his son's vengance.
Codeword: SkyClan
Other: Nope